The factual details te author includes are:
-It fell to earth at approximately 3:15 p.m. on June 12, 2014.
-NASA scientis concluded that the spherical metal object was likely part of a spacecraft that survived reentry.
For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
Answer:
Sir, Through this letter you have to inform that I am getting very high electricity bill for last 2 months which is about Rs. 20000 is more. It appears that there has been an unexpected increase in the bill, because I know that our electricity consumption is not so high.
Explanation:
I believe the correct answer is: iambic pentameter.
The first line “Not marble, nor the gilded monuments” of William Shakespeare’s “Sonnet LV” is written in iambic pentameter, the line of verse which consists of five metrical feet, one short (or unstressed) syllable followed by one long (or stressed) syllable. Therefore, every second syllable is emphasized.
1. Puppy = Direct Object
2. Alaskan Husky = Predicate Nominative
3. Her = Indirect Object
4. White = Predicate Adjective