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Alekssandra [29.7K]
3 years ago
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What is something i can correct in this paragraph? ill give u brainliest

English
1 answer:
Dafna11 [192]3 years ago
5 0

Answer:

Put a period after: later on got called "The Shot".

Where you say "Another reason is if your watching" -  the your is you're

Get rid of "could" in your last sentence. it will make you seem more confident.

Explanation:

It looks good otherwise!

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