During a lecture in class I was talking to my best friend about our argument yesterday. The bell rang and I hadn’t been able to take the notes necessary for our Unit Test. I came to class the next day and did really bad on our test. By not paying attention I was able to negatively effect my grade. Since that day I began to pay more attention in class.
The word vale, adds a scholarly feel to the poem, and allows the poem to flow better overall. It is also a huge difference in the rhythm, as it has only one syllable rather than two.
The word margin was used to add a new taste of vocabulary. Margin's other meaning is "an amount by which a thing is won or falls short" so in using this word, one has the feeling that it is almost but not quite the analogy used. So it's an implication to the poem's analogy itself, giving a sort of fourth wall experience.
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