the rest is good besides the stuff at the bottom
Explanation:
mixed mixed the second and third sentence instead of a period on the second sentence do a comma. for for the sentence she became involved with theater mix it with the next sentence with a comma instead of a period.
This probably means that something you had planned to turn out well, ended up going against you. The scenario flipped it's self around and you were so said "betrayed" by your own plan or game.
I wanted their children to have a better education. Hope this helps! :)
