Traditional Native Americanism, If not correct please forgive me
Ok, so body paragraph 1 was amazing! However, I found somethings you might want to change in body paragraph 2. First, "He saw all the beautiful things around the swamp that surprised him. Until he found the rarest flower he could ever find." This could be changed a bit! So, is change it to, "Around the swamp, he saw many beautiful things that surprised him, until he found the rarest flower anyone could ever find." It just sounds a bit better, and you and your professor might like it, too! Everything else was amazing.
Popular is a predicate adjective. A predicate adjective is an adjective that comes after a linking verb and describes the subject of the sentence.<span>The word "popular" is an adjective and means that the subject (in this case the roller-coaster ride) is liked and/or frequented by lots of people. another example of a predicate adjective is " the boy is tall."
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