Answer:
First: Check for spelling or grammar mistake, and fix those. Second, check the formatting and structure, you could have the most perfectly grammatically correct piece of writing, ruined by the fact that nothing is in order. Thirdly, look at words and phrases to make sure you are not using any ambiguous language.
I think it's C but I'm not really sure
Answer: the first one A
Explanation:
On the day of the festival, the sun shone on the kids playing in the park. Meanwhile, the band's music filled the air.
I got: A. a children's story that teaches a lesson
(apex)
Answer:
O Despite the controversy surrounding its origins, the impact of film is not contested
Explanation:
In the given passage, Yuma wrote the impact of film in the modern world. The given conclusion also includes a statement about how it would become a normal presence in our lives.
But among the given options, the sentence <em>"despite the controversy surrounding its origins the impact of film is not contested"</em> would be the best addition to the given conclusion passage. This is because the two conclusion sentences were written by Yuma mention the time film emerged and be a part of daily American life. And adding detail about the controversy surrounding the origin of films and how their impact is not contested will add to a much more detailed conclusion.
Thus, the correct answer is the third option.
