I'm not sure but here's the definition of Parallel Structure. ( Using the same pattern of words to show that two or more ideas have the same level of importance). You can go with either the first or second sentence that's my opinion but I'm really not 100% sure. Sorry I couldn't been more helpful. I tried
It is a statement of opinion best describes the statement
Spoken words give a look into how the characters acts. You can hear the feelings of multiple characters. Internal thoughts give you direct feelings of one character; the narrator:)