Anti-climax greatly annoys readers. If they're going to put the time into reading something because it has an engaging plot, they're going to expect an equally interesting climax to arise out of that plot. If the readers don't get that, they're going to feel cheated.
She shows that she began to trust when she opens up conversationally about her flowers, and also physically, when she takes off her hat, draws out her hair and invites him beyond the fence.
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