Yes I think it does. To be safe I think you should research it.
“Fair is foul and foul is fair” ...
“Brave Macbeth – Well he deserves that name – Confronted him with brandished steel” ...
“Stars hide your fires; let not light see my dark and deep desires” ...
“Come you spirits, that tend on mortal thoughts.
Answer:
Don't start sentences with how or but. it needs commas. and some of them sound like incomplete sentences/ thoughts. Attach some of the sentences together.
Explanation:
I think A would be the best for a persuasive essay