Compliment him on his acomplishments ( ex ; good grades ) or tell him how he has impacted you in a great way ( ex ; thank you for teaching me... it has changed my life in... and I am proud of you and for shaping me in a great way. )
You need to give a quote :)
Instead of “all the members” put “all of the members”. “yet” instead of “but”. instead of “i always change schools very often”, put “i continue to change schools often”
instead of “it was not my best childhood as a shepard daughter” put. “it was not THE best”
