Example:
One day, a boy walked to his friend’s house.
Which substitution in diction would best improve the setting in the sentence without changing the meaning of the sentence?
replace “day” with “warm afternoon”
Replace “a boy” with “Cameron”
Replace “walked” with “drove”
Replace “house” with “school”
Answer: Replace “a boy” with “Cameron”
Answer:
When I think about my past, I usually cringe, but I'm glad I want through those moments in my life because they help me think twice about what I do now. In the past, I used to get bullied by people I thought were friends, so now I look for red flag in people I meet. I met a guy in my class and we liked each other, but after a while he accused me of liking other guys, and I guess broke my heart. Now, I know how to act if something like that happens again.
Explanation:
:).
The boy with the birthmark backside he probably got too close to the fire