Pathos is correct. (APEX)
The comma should be between “turnips” and “and”
Answer: Here ya go
Explanation: I would want to be her friend becuase of her determination and kind spirit. She shows passion in all she does. She takes care of her brother while balancing school and running. She is courageous and strong. She feels misunderstood and I would show her that she is beautiful and deserves to be seen as such. She stands up for others and wants to complete her dreams. She changes her way of life to protect herself and her brother from being bullied. She misses her parents and the country. When she wins, she is not boastful. When she wins the 500-yard dash, she is happy but does not gloat. She smiles at her rival who got second place. Her change of heart shows how genuine and kind she is. She can do anything she sets her mind to as long as stays strong. She is caring and determined.