Excellent.
Things to fix (mostly syntax):
- Cool right. -> Cool, right? (as a question)
Answer:
My eyes are the worst lol I can't see the questions
Explanation:
better pic?
It would be about over a thousand words. An average for 3-4 years olds is a few thousand words.
D, First person narrative uses I, me, my, etc.
Protagonist- good
antagonist- bad