Is that some kind of show or something?
Tips on writing essays:
-Don't be wordy. Use clear sentences, and write down the points you want to make beforehand so you know exactly what you need to write about.
-Don't be afraid to edit! Write a full story if you need to, and then clean it up when you're done writing to make it legible and precise.
-Don't focus on how many words/letters you've written so far. Write as much as you can, and then after you're done with the editing process add more if needed.
-Don't include sentences that don't support your main topic, that could get your grade lowered.
-Don't rush yourself, even if you're in a hurry. Your writing will come out sloppy and it'll be very transparent you just started working on it.
It would be the first sentence. chronological means from first to last and the first one would be the only one that makes sense.
Juror #10 reveals his prejudice almost immediately when he says, "Well, it's the element. They let the kids run wild. Maybe it serves ‘em right." By using the pronouns "they" and "them" he makes a general statement about the people who are considered poor.
Juror #3's prejudice is first revealed when he says, "It's the kids. The way they are—you know? They don't <span>listen." He goes on to talk about his son and how he "made a man out of [him]." His prejudice is directed towards teenagers and their supposed lack of respect for their fathers.</span>
Actually, as a writer myself, the rough draft is the second step for writing a story. the first step is an outline of what to include in the story. then its your rough draft after the outline. the rough draft is like the paper but you are aware that you will have to go back and change some stuff. the rough rough drafts do include and introduction paragraph a body, and a conclusion paragraph. writing the rough draft before your actual story the better it will be. all writers do that. a rough draft include everything that your original story will have but the draft will be needing some work. so your rough draft is sort of like a few paragraphs having the main points and ideas. you also wrote description, be careful although details are very important you have to keep in mind too much details in one paragraph is going to be too much. for example, i suffer though this as well, imagine you introduced other characters other than the main character, if you describe what they look like in one paragraph, its not going to be interesting for the reader. so you can, perhaps when that character is talking, you can hint in some details about them!!!
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