After heading east after world war one he seeks to escape the monotony and move to the Midwest to make a fortune.
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Answer:
After changing the pronoun focus, the sentences can be:
Walking is one of the best forms of exercise because it helps one lose weight and improve one's cardiovascular systems while one enjoys being outside in the fresh air.
(Alternative answer - see the explanation below)
Walking is one of the best forms of exercise because it helps people lose weight and improve their cardiovascular systems while they enjoys being outside in the fresh air.
Explanation:
When writing formally, we must avoid permeating our texts with sentences that are too personal. Formal writing demands impersonality, which makes it sound more trustworthy and unbiased. Therefore, using the first person "I" should be avoided. One way to substitute it is by using the pronoun "one", as we did in the first answer above. Some people find it difficult to use "one". If that is the case, we can always use "you" or "people". These do not sound as formal as "you", but are still less personal and informal than "I".
<span>The many organ system changes that occur because of alcohol take toll on the kidneys, which cannot function optimally. This failure leads to retention of body fluids. Symptoms include swelling of body tissues, such as feet, legs, hands, and face. Kidney failure is inevitable with end-stage liver disease.</span>
" liked " is gonna be a past tense verb because it ends in -ed
Possibly "Ballet is a performance dance that requires great skill and dedication."
