<span>3 The speaker imagines that angels have arrived and spread perfume in the room.
1 The speaker watches as the raven flies in and perches on the bust of Pallas.
2 The speaker is amused by the royal appearance of the bird and asks the bird its name.
7 The speaker feels like his soul is trapped in the raven’s shadow.
4 The speaker asks the raven if he’ll ever get over the misery of losing his love, Lenore.
6 The speaker gets angry at the Raven and shouts at it to fly away.
5 The speaker wants to know if he’ll ever meet Lenore in Heaven.</span>
Determination, baggage, advice, athletics. I'm actually reading the book now and I think those could explain him?
The mistakes:
• “I hear you will go to Paris last month”
Should be- “I heard you went to Paris last month.”
• “I am sure you will.”
Should be- “I’m sure you did.”
• “Will you see Sophia...”
Should be- “Did you see Sophia...”
• “I did heard Ridley...”
Should be- “I did hear Ridley...”
• “I will see our old friend Steven Eastwood last week.”
Should be- “I saw our old friend Steven Eastwood last week.”
• “He will be doing very well.”
Should be- “He was doing very well.”
• “It was called U.T...
Should be- “It is called U.T...”
• “You must saw it.”
Should be- “You must see it.”
That’s all! The main problem through out this passage was the tenses. The mistakes should be put into past tense.
Hope this helps; have a good day! :)