It’s looks great very detailed and well put together.
Astrology is a method of predicting mundane events based upon the assumption that the celestial bodies—particularly the planets and the stars considered in their arbitrary combinations or configurations (called constellations)—in some way either determine or indicate changes in the sublunar world
Anne combines "toilet water", or as we would call it nowadays, perfume.
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