Yes
It uses a lot of commas where you can easily put periods, and it uncomfortably merges multiple sentences into one
How Fishermen's Bragging Rights Gave Birth To Fine Art : The Salt In 19th-century Japan, fishermen found a foolproof way to record trophy catches: a "fish rubbing" inked onto paper, creating a permanent record of their size. Gyotaku soon evolved into fine art.
Society has different viewpoints because the society most likely has never seen something or something about someone before and they are going to think differently about them
