The model headstone Atkinson has just finished carving bears Withencroft's full name, his date of birth, and that very day as the date of his death.
The Black civil rights movement was fighting for African american rights, the biggest person who fought were people like martin luther king and or malcolm x. They fought having a dream chlidren could go to school without seregation or havind seperate bathrooms and water fountains, it was childish, but now we have what we fought for, except african americans are still being killed for no reason and they are being judged by the color of the skin and not who they are, there is still progress and changes to make.
College tuition should be free for a number of reasons. The first one is it continues the cycle of poverty. You see, people want to get into to college, but those who can't afford can't go, even with loans. And when they can't go to college or a trade school, (you need a degree to get a good job), they go to get a job somewhere that pays minimum wage. And minimum wage DOES NOT pay enough to live. So it continues the cycle of poverty.
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I believe from what I see that every sentence has been turned from present tense to past tense. One example could be Number 5- Instead of, 'Peter is going to take the package later.", it could be in past tense, as in Peter already took the package- "Later, Peter took the package."
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