The paragraph doesnt flow very well because of all the simple sentences. it has a very simple rythm and the most important ideas are "<span>As a young girl, she struggled a great deal. She left home at 21. She moved to the West Coast. There, she chose to educate herself. She chose studies over security. She lived in poverty for many years. She eventually got a job teaching at university." This is because it stays on topic. Everything else really isnt important.The ideas are all spread out and really dont connect very well. TO improve this paragraph you need to connect the sentenes and change some to stay on topic.</span>
Answer: She wanted to recapture mungo park of wonder and determination.
Explanation: Salak decided on the journey alone on a kayak, because she was hoping to recapture Mungo Park's sense of wonder and determination. Salak's trip was deeply a personal trip, which she used in sharing her fears.
Her main motive for undertaking the journey was to buy back the two Bella slave women.
Salak learns that after her difficult journey, her normal life is very repetitious and that her life on the river was unpredictable. She also felt like she was one with the river.
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I believe it is 1 and 2. i covered this at the end of last year and remember that much.
Explanation:
Salarino and Solanio, two Venetian merchants, notice their friend Antonio has been out of sorts lately. Antonio has sent several ships abroad to trade goods in many ports, so his friends speculate that he has overextended his fortunes in shaky investments.
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