In the sentence "They say we will not be able to afford to own houses in a few years." there's a <u>pronoun reference</u> error. It is unclear who the pronouns<em> they </em>or <em>we </em>are referring to.
Pronouns are used to replace nouns, and it is considered to be a pronoun reference error when the reader is unable to deduce from the text the noun being replaced by the pronoun.
Your write numbers down instead of righting it in standard form. For example two instead of 2
Farther! Cuz the other options don't make sense grammatically.
Answer:
I think that the use of suspense in this paragraph is excellent.
It makes me want to read on and hear more about what happened to the old lady.
Explanation:
I like how you used the following words:
whirred
gently
clawed
grasping
wispy
sensible
woolen
rocked
move
I think they are very good words as they describe what is going on :)
