Answer:
A "the right to ask its question after the page / came up flush against its face." ( Lines 2-3)
Explanation:
For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
Explanation:
you are gonna change the world again, then we are going to celebrate
Answer:
la verdad no te entendí nada y no se la repuesta perdón
