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An author's purpose in using rhetoric is to create a certain effect for the reader.
<em>Rhetoric</em> refers to the use of the figure of speech and other techniques through persuasive and effective writings. The use of the figure of speech helps the author to connect with the reader and vice- versa. It helps in the better understanding and feeling of the story-line.
Some of the examples of rhetorical devices are:
- Alliteration (repetition of initial consonant sound)
- Simile (comparison of one object with another, not literal)
- Onomatopoeia (imitation of the word described.)
- Hyperbole (exaggeration of words), and so on.
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She couldn't take it any longer; it was just too much for her.
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She couldn't take it any longer. It was just too much for her.
President Washington made a good choice when he decided not to accept the recommendations of his advisors and instead insisted that the United States stay neutral during the war between France and England