Is this a good intro?

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2 answers:

user100 [1]2 years ago

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Yes it is a good intro !

zhuklara [117]2 years ago

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It’s a good intro, but I would combine the second and third sentence by adding a coma between them and because. Also don’t forget to capitalize Lion King, since it’s a name.

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