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After the children left the school bus, they dropped their bags on the front proches of their houses. The children yelled "Hello!" to their mothers and fathers and ran towards the playground to play tag with each other.
Answer:
The following dialogue from the coach makes Jeremy to understand his strength as an athlete:
Coach: Those little one don't need to see flawless execution, they need to know how to try, fail and keep going anyway.
Explanation:
When Jeremy came to the coach to apologize for his bad performance and how he messed up when the coach really wanted him to impress the boys, the coach told him that he was as aspiring as he expected. Jeremy was a little surprised by the coach's statement and told him that if it would have been a competition, he would have gotten points deducted for various reasons. Before Jeremy could name any reason, coach interrupted him and explained it to him that the little kids need to know that you have to try, fail and still keep going, which they couldn't learn with a flawless execution. This boosted Jeremy's confidence in his strength as an athlete
Answer, the man has no gloves, the bucket looks like its about to fall, there is a newspaper on the prep station, this was all i could see i know it says 5 but i cant see anymore hope this helped anyways
