Guy calls the doctor, says the wife’s contractions are five minutes apart. Doctor says, Is this her first child?guy says, No, it’s her husband.I promise to try to remember who I am. Wife gets up on one elbow,says, I wanted to get married. It seemed a fulfillment of someseveral things, a thing to be done. Even the diamond ring was something like a quest, a thing they set you out to get and how insanethe quest is; how you have to turn it every way before you can eventhink to seek it; this metaphysical refraining is in fact the quest.
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-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
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My best friend, Sarah, absolutely loves animals agreed to take care of my dog.
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I bolded the mistakes/changes
