so just pic another book that u have read of your choice and it doesn't have to be long, but just let your imagination write about that book :)
<span>The writing is choppy.
I believe this is the answer. If the writing was connected, sentences would already be combined. Varied writing and lengthy writing usually has nothing to do with sentence combination.</span>
I am a bird
i fly high in the sky
i am also a nerd
and i can fly very high
<u>Paragraph introducing myself as the merchant in the Canterbury tales:</u>
I am the merchant from the Canterbury Tales. Of course, I am sure that you can tell that from my attire consisting of this multi color cloak and beard. I am someone who is well versed in the money exchange and because of that, I have been hired by many successful businessmen in the country. I also well versed in the fields of financial and business matters to the extent where, I am present in almost all of the business meetings that takes place in the town.