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I would say to not repeat any mistakes and to understand others familys Explanation:
a. right of access
none of the others really work imo
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Reviewed, read explanation.
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Paragraph 1: Second sentence would sound better if you added how trade even helped develop some of the empire's economies. For example, the Tang Empire thrived off of the silk China traded on the Silk Road. "Trade even spread religion all around the world" Specify, 'like the religion of_____' (HINT: Buddhism). 'Trade to and from Rome led a lot of people to turn to Christanity and Catholicsm' I suggest not saying turn to but convert. Last sentence does not make sense after talking about how interactions between traders led to converstion of different religions, maybe move it to the tip after you say 'anything from crops to even their langauges' then add a transition sentence after that so things flow better.
Paragraph 2: 'One of the more popular trade routes is called The Silk Road' replace popular with notable. 'The Silk Road was lengthy, spreading from Persia to China and all the countries in between.' I don't think lengthy is the right adjective, try just saying long or large. Also, I thought The Silk Road was from China to Rome/West Europe? Fact check please. 'The Silk Road was very benevolent in trade and allowed many countries to exchange goods' The idea of countries really did not exist at this time. Try replacing countries with regions or civilizations.
Paragraph 3: 'Without the trade business, we wouldn't be able to have a wide range of items.' Replace trae business with trading network. You also say 'we' should first person pronouns be used in an essay like this? Check with your teacher. Overall, nice job!
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Interaction between Native Americans—the people Columbus called “Indians”–and other Americans, has taken place in every period of American history. Although white people—especially the early colonists—accepted much from the natives, they rarely considered Indians their equals. In the second half of the 19th century, conflict
between whites and natives was at its worst.
In this part you’ll investigate the question: How did interaction with other Americans
affect Native American societies?
Investigation: Plains Tribal Culture
When societies with differing cultures come in contact, differing ways of acting and thinking often cause problems. A society that believes each tree holds the spirit of an ancestor is likely to take a dim view of a logging crew. A society that lives by exact “clock time” may have problems interacting with another group that uses more relaxed “sun time.”
The cultures—the ideas and ways of acting—of the Native American tribes were not all alike. Nevertheless, many tribes were similar. Those living in the Great Plains (Cheyenne, Sioux, and Comanche, for example) shared many ideas and ways of acting, as did those in the Rocky Mountains. All reacted similarly when pioneers moved into their territory in the second half of the 1800s.
You should include sensory lanhuage amd emotive language
