Answer:
the answer is the last one
The effect of the Donner party is they stopped at a better location with grazing for cattle and shops for wagon repairs. They planned on going fort Laramie but decided to stop at fort Bernard instead which is 10 miles east of fort Laramie because they were warned that Indians were fighting ahead the grazing for cattle was poor at for Laramie and they could get wagon repairs at fort Bernard.
Answer:
D) Most people figured that Columbus discovered America, made friends with the Indians, and then told everyone else about this land.
Explanation:
Revision of any text or passage is need for a number of reasons, ranging from a simple grammar mistake to making the paper more precise, focused, structured, etc. The revision also allows for improved analytical skills, challenging one's own ideas, more strengthened argument, etc.
Among the given sentences, the one that needs to be revised is sentence D. Looking at the words used in this particular sentence, it is evident that the words are too informal, be it using<em> "most people figured", "made friends", or "told everyone else"</em>. They make the sentence too simple, too friendly, something one does with a close friend or relative. If these words are revised with words like 'most people believed', 'formed close relationship/ befriended', or 'revealed to everyone', then that makes the sentence seem more formal.
Thus, the correct answer is option D.
