It seems a bit messy so it might be good to organized your ideas. The main idea you need to develop is why baseball is your favourite sport.
Introduction: you can talk about baseball in general providing relevant information about this sport.
"(in my opinion ) b<span>aseball is a great form of getting into shape and also enjoying fresh air and even socializing as it is a team sport". This might be your thesis statement. so in the following paragraphs you are going to develop and expand each of this characteristics.
paragraph 1. get into shape. describe/ provide information/ explain why?
paragraph 2: fresh air
paragraph 3: socializing.
Conclusion: remember that in the conclusion you should not provide new information, this is just an enumeration of what you stated. So you might say "in conclusion/to conclude, Baseball is my favourite sport because ...." and you state again all the ideas already mentioned. </span><span />
Makhaya ran from South
Africa, he did not want to start a family there because of how people were treated. they did no have
freedom or their rights were not guarantee. <span>
<span>Due to what he suffered in his country, now he is a refugee
and he is not able to trust anyone. But this conditions changes because he
means well to other people in Golema Mmidi so he starts to be social and help
them,</span></span>
Answer: Check for accuracy
Explanation:
What is it that you mean or language and typ it English,Spanish or french so I can understand put mostly put it in English, please.
