I don't think a correction is necessary. Both parts of the sentence are already in the present tense. Plus, the use of "us" in the beginning of the sentence indicates a personal attachment.
Answer:

Rohini ,
Sector - 5
New - Delhi .
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<u>Date : </u>4 November, 2021
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The Editor,
The Times of India
New Delhi .
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<u>Subject : </u>Wastage of water in Rohini .
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Sir,
Through your Elite newspaper ,I would like to draw attention of local authorities on saving water as it has been one of the Greatest issue .
There are many places seen in our area where water is leaking from the pipes all the time .People waste water from the public washrooms by leaving the tap open .Moreover , there have been children these days, who play water fights on the streets .The waste of water leads to depletion of human life .People must be aware of proper usage of water and it's importance .There must be camps for saving water .
Hence, through this letter I would request concerned authorities to take immidiate steps to save water and people must be aware of saving water and it's importance .There must be camps for saving water .
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Thank you!
<u>Priya</u>


[----] Refers to <u>leaving a line .</u>

Answer:
Bad communication
Cliques, exclusion + gossipy behavior
Bad leadership
Unmotivated coworkers
Stifled growth
Rapid employee turnover
No work-life balance
Battling burnout
Has little or no forward movement
Triggers a gut feeling
Explanation:
Yes, Martin luther king was a patriot