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trying to remember the most important parts of the passage and just making it a smaller answer
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Every summer, my dad teaches a science class about sea turtles in the Atlantic Ocean.
DON’T SAY THIS EXACTLY, REPHRASE AND MAKE BETTER, IM JUST GIVING IDEAS
The author could use more data especially for the 3rd paragraph, like about how much time is spent in community service, the author should use more data to try to show the reader the positives and negatives of the community service work