I think that it is mostly Jeannette that has a strong reaction to fire. After returning from the hospital, Jeannette becomes enthralled by fire. Her parents support this, insistent that she not be defeated or afraid of that which led to her injury. Not only does Jeannette resume cooking hot dogs on the stove (to the delight of her mother) but she also starts to steal her father’s matches.
The third one.
O My face turned bright red and my eyes swelled with tears when the teacher called on me and I didn't know the answer
There should be a period after writing it should look like this : " writing. She can"
the sentence also says "through her words" when after "words" , there should also be a period.
Other than the missing periods your sentence seems fine.
You could also use a comma after "writing" instead of a period and make the S in "She" a lower case.
I hope this helps you.
I can't help you but try adding adjectives and detailed descriptions maybe that's what your teacher wants?
