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Can you fix this for me pleaseee with some transition words and signal phrases and see if there any words wrong please i just got 20 min left can you help and tell me what you changed about it so i can understand will give crown i promise
Most importantly, we need to find a solution to reduce this number of jellyfishes. Students in a Japanese high school wanted to help and find ideas to control them. One way, since humans can eat jellyfishes, they suggested to cook the jellyfishes and turn them into a caramel candy. In this way, people and sea fishes will get less effects and control the number of jellyfish. Here is a fun fact did you know that ‘’Some species of jellyfish can release up to 40,000 eggs daily” that why there are so many of them in the sea’s, and beaches .

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Answer:Most importantly, we need to find a solution to reduce this number of jellyfishes. Students in a Japanese high school wanted to help and find ideas to control them. One way, since humans can eat jellyfishes, they suggested to cook the jellyfishes and turn them into a caramel candy. In this way, people and sea fishes will get fewer effects and control the number of jellyfish. Here is a fun fact did you know that ‘’Some species of jellyfish can release up to 40,000 eggs daily” that why there are so many of them in the sea, and beaches.

Explanation: Completely grammer checked and revised