<span>To develop this simple story, a "conflict" or a "breaking event" would be needed, with its "resolution" as ending, usually teaching a good message; be careful with the tense choices. A story sample could be: Everyday, a boy named Sam went on cycling in the park. He trained really hard as his dream was to be a world class champion cyclist. One day, he saw other children, younger than him, trying to ride their mini bikes at the park. They seemed to be frustrated and angry as they kept on falling, even bruising themselves; they ended up crying while throwing and kicking their bikes on the ground. Sam couldn't keep still, seeing their tears and the bikes being mistreated. He decided to help them out, properly and patiently teaching them how to ride a bike. Although reluctant at first, the children slowly followed his instructions and day by day, step by step, they managed not only to properly ride their bikes, but to be almost faster than Sam himself. They soon became best friends and rivals for life, deciding to build a team together, aiming to be the best in this sport.</span>
Well, it seems to be pretty good as it is. I would suggest a few grammatical changes, just to make it flow a little better. Also, I don't know if you're trying to be overly polite in booking the tickets, but people don't tend to be so formal when buying things over the phone, but that isn't really important for homework like this.
J'aimerai should be translated, and the sentence should be condensed a bit, so it would be something along the lines of "I'd like to have two seats for my friend and me, next to each other and in the middle, if possible."
Near the end, one of the responses is written as "Just a second, I seek. Viola." It should be rearranged slightly so it flows better, so something like, "I'm looking for it, just a second," or just "Just a second." The "I'm looking for it," or "I seek," as you wrote it, is often implied. "Viola" can stay, if you'd like, or you could say, "Oh, I found it," or "Here it is," if you use the implied version.
Below that is the phrase "All is perfect..." This seems a little weird to me, so I would suggest saying something like, "It's all good," or just "perfect."
When thanking the person over the phone, most people don't use the title "Madam." Just a simple "ma'am" or "miss" would be used, or no title at all, just "Thanks."
I hope this helps!
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It emphasizes the length of Gilgamesh's and Enkidu's journey.
Hope this helps!
