Answer:
1) Their nest must be close: I've seen them fly into the tree next to my bedroom window
2) Their afternoons are spent soaking up the sun and enjoying each other's company.
3) I think it's amazing that a dog and some birds spend so much of their time together.
1. Always deliver what you promise.
2. Each pronoun should agree with their antecedent.
3. Between you and I, case is important.
4. Verbs have to agree with their subjects.
5. Don't be a person whom people realize confuses "who" and "whom."
6. Never use no double negatives.
7. A writer should not shift their point of view.
8. When writing, participle must not be dangled. Don't do it even if it's hard not to.
9. Join clauses good, like a conjunction should.
10. Don't write run-on sentences, you need to punctuate them properly.
11. About sentence fragments. Don't. Unless it's for effect.
12. In letter themes and reports use commas to separate items in a series as well as phrases and clauses when required.
13. Don't, use commas, that aren't necessary.
14. Its important to use apostriphe's in the right place's.
15. Don't abbrev. unless approved by the Associated Press Stylebook.
16. Check to see you any words out.
17. Try to never split infinitives.
18. Avoid using a preposition to end a sentence with. That's a practice up with which some readers will not put.
19. Parallel structure will help you in writing more effective sentences to express yourself more gracefully and its pleasing to your editor.
20. In my own personal opinion I think that an author when he is writing should not get into the habit of making use of too many unnecessary words that he does not really need to use.
21. Last but not least, lay off the cliches and mixed metaphors. They might kindle a flood if anger in your editor.
Yes, that's twenty one, but they all needed to be listed to properly answer this question. The errors in the sentences are all purposeful and intended.
I do hope this helped you. :)
The best graphic organizer to use to better a comparison passage is a Venn diagram.
Answer:
<em>You haven't attached Paragraph 4, so I'll answer the question according to my understanding.</em>
C) They sailed to France and Belgium and told them that England and Scotland was a land they (the Phoenicians) had been to and found tin and lead there.
Explanation:
"Phoenicians" were very skilled in <em>building ships</em> and <em>navigating turbulent waters.</em> This allowed them to<em> travel and trade</em> from one place to the other.
Upon reaching the Islanders, they were able to trade with them. The Islanders gave them metals in exchange for their goods. These people in Britain were actually poor savages and didn't look clean. Yet, the Phoenicians sailed to France and Belgium and told them that "Britain" <em>(England and Scotland)</em> was a land where they had found "tin" and "lead." <u>These materials were very important during those times. </u>The French and the Belgians were then convinced and decided to come over the Islands as well.
That’s a simile
A simile is a comparison using “like” or “as”