How could sentence 11 be revised to better transition to sentence 12 and describe what the campground was like when the narrator
arrived? A. When we got to our campground, there were people everywhere trying to grab a campsite. B. When we got to our campground, it was only mid-morning, but the campsites were already filling up fast. C. When we got to our campground, it was already crowded, and we knew we should have left earlier. D. When we got to our campground, most of the campsites were already taken by people who got there earlier.
Option B: When we got to our campground, it was only mid-morning, but the campsites were already filling up fast.
Explanation:
Option B clearly explains that it was mid morning when they reached the campground but campsites were filling up fast.
Option A is incorrect as it says that people were trying to grab campsites when they reached. Option C says that they should have left earlier, so it is incorrect. Option D also doesn't mention about the early filling up of the camp. Thus, of all the options, the better transition will be statement B.
The atmosphere created by this setting is the wide desert he was in had so many dunes that he was lost in the middle of it, surrounded by a huge wilderness.
I would not get involved with any of it, drama could start and it could end with negative results for you as well. it will catch up with jana eventually.
