How could sentence 11 be revised to better transition to sentence 12 and describe what the campground was like when the narrator

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How could sentence 11 be revised to better transition to sentence 12 and describe what the campground was like when the narrator

arrived? A. When we got to our campground, there were people everywhere trying to grab a campsite. B. When we got to our campground, it was only mid-morning, but the campsites were already filling up fast. C. When we got to our campground, it was already crowded, and we knew we should have left earlier. D. When we got to our campground, most of the campsites were already taken by people who got there earlier.

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algol [13] · Answer 1 · 2022-05-31T01:09:40+03:00

Answer:

Better transition of the sentence is:

Option B: When we got to our campground, it was only mid-morning, but the campsites were already filling up fast.

Explanation:

Option B clearly explains that it was mid morning when they reached the campground but campsites were filling up fast.

Option A is incorrect as it says that people were trying to grab campsites when they reached. Option C says that they should have left earlier, so it is incorrect. Option D also doesn't mention about the early filling up of the camp. Thus, of all the options, the better transition will be statement B.