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Gala2k [10]
3 years ago
14

Porfa necesito una critica constructiva de esta historia ( es para un juego) y doy 25 puntos al que sea con mas argumentos , y c

osas asi, GRacias y sean honestos :
El planeta tierra en el año 2056,Se produjo un cambio climatico,su impacto fue enorme, La contaminacion y la sobreexplotacion de los recursos
acabo con la capa de ozono por completo,Haciendo una sequia en todo el mundo. Se incremento inundaciones, tormentas, y olas de calor extremas haciendo
acabar con casi toda la raza humana y los animales,Pero los gobiernos del mundo, Prepararon un plan para evacuar el planeta con los sobrevivientes,Tienen
una nave que viaja a la velocidad de la luz.
Social Studies
1 answer:
motikmotik3 years ago
6 0

Answer and Explanation:

Comencemos con el analisis del tema de la historia:

<em>El planeta en un futuro cambiante a consecuencia del cambio climatico</em>. Este tema no es solamente interesante sino que es sumamente importante tanto para la ciencia como para todos los seres vivos ya que todos somos afectados por este fenomeno y sus consecuencias.

Sin embargo, la estructura tiene algunas fallas: carece de fluidez. Ademas, hace falta una mejora en la gramatica y el formato del texto. Yo escribiria, por ejemplo: <em>El planeta Tierra en el año 2056 se caracteriza por exhibir las importantes consecuencias del cambio climatico, ya que su impacto fue enorme y devastador. La contaminacion y la sobreexplotacion de recursos ocasiono un gran daño a la capa de ozono. Esto llevo a numerosas regiones a sufrir sequias y a otras, a sufrir fuertes tormentas, inundaciones y olas de calor extremas, acabando con una gran proporcion de poblaciones humanas y de vida silvestre.</em>

<em />

Para finalizar la historia, tendria mas sentido si incluyera mas detalles como: <em>Prepararon un plan para evacuar el planeta con los sobrevivientes</em> - ¿Evacuar hacia que otro planeta?... <em>Construyeron una nave que viaja a la velocidad de la luz</em> - ¿Cuales son los beneficios?

<em>Nota: No me es posible colocar acentos en la respuesta.</em>

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