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Revising
prewriting is just getting basic ideas down/planning
drafting is turning those ideas into sentences and paragraphs making your rough draft
editing is major changes such as rearranging, adding, or deleting sentences
revising is small changes such as grammar or spelling
Newspaper articles is the one that makes sense to me the most.
Sir.
I write this letter to show my concern about the increase in violence and criminality in our state. Although speaking for me, I represent all residents who feel threatened and terrified by what is happening.
In my community, and in many others, we have to live with a group of malefactors who plague our peace. We are constantly victims of thefts, in addition to having to live with graffiti from our homes and harassment of women and the elderly. We are in urgent need of help and I know that you can help us.
These malefactors usually meet and do their crimes at night, around 10 pm, in this case, I believe it would be a good time for you and your team to arrest them in the act and remove them from society so that they can be reeducated and stop harassing us so badly.
Thank you in advance for your understanding and I expect answers.
Sincerely,
Lean Dean.
C
Reason - subject starts at sentence and followed by the subordinating sentence which is chandler yelling for help!
