Answer:C
Explanation:
Wayyyy too wordy. Says too much in one run-on. Could be broken up into 2/3 smaller sentences
Answer:
B. No
Explanation:
Faulty parallelism occurs when items in a series do not have the same grammatical structure. Below are examples of sentences with faulty parallelism, followed by their corrections: Faulty: I like to spend my winter holiday skating, skiing, and I enjoy snowboarding as well.
<u>Correct:</u> I like swimming better than diving. & I like to swim better than to dive.
<u>Faulty:</u> I like swimming better than to dive.
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The first text box is C, since it introduces text with "picture this" and a nice setting they'd like to imagine.
The second text box is B as it flows the hook (which gets the audience's attention) smoothly into the claim.
The third text box is A, as it goes into detail on the writer's claim
The fourth text box is D, as the word "however" indicates there will be a counterclaim
The last text box is E since it goes into detail on the counterclaim.
