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Serga [27]
3 years ago
5

This commentary is from the question paper, 9093/12/O/N/18, please go through my commentary and tell me how to improve i really

am struggling with this part of English. My exams are coming soon, please help me. Anyone, criticism would be much appreciated

World Languages
1 answer:
Karolina [17]3 years ago
7 0

First you need to change your hand writing.Examiners might give you less marks than you thought it to be.Second to make your essays attract the readers, you need to insert the main topic and don't forget to write the literal verse.Literal verse means the sentences that already been given in the statement or in the question.To make you clear, you must remind yourself to underline or highlight the keywords in the question given.By doing it this way, you already know how to write the essays according to the correct arrangment.Third, you must write the most important thing which is implied verse.It means your own ideas about something related to things that you wanna write.For example, you need to write about your nightmare and the question gives you just two hints such as you've screamed too much in your dream that people cannot hear any of it and you'd been invisible in your dream.Then the rest of it you need to come out with your own ideas.At this part, the readers might think that you're a creative writer.In your essays you wrote 'Paragraph 3'.Don't just simply write it like that.You need to add something in front of it like 'In'.So it'll be 'In paragraph 3'.Punctuations, grammars all of these are very important.To make it very interesting, you can add discourse marker.Last but not least, believe yourself and be confident with what you've done with it.I believe that you can improve this wayGood luck for your coming exam

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Saroj smiriti summary in hindi
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‘निराला’ जी की दो कविताओं (सरोज स्मृति और राम की शक्ति पूजा ) को गीत भी कहा जाता हैं. सरोज स्मृति करुण रस से भरा एक कविता/गीत हैं. राम की शक्ति पूजा ‘वीर रस’ से भरा एक कविता/गीत हैं. ये दोनों ही निराला जी की बेहतरीन रचनाओं में से हैं.

सरोज स्मृति कविता | Saroj Smriti Kavita

इस कविता के माध्यम से निराला का जीवन संघर्ष भी प्रकट हुआ हैं. तभी तो वो कहते हैं “दुःख ही जीवन की कथा रही, क्या कहूँ आज जो नहीं कही”

सरोज स्मृति – पृष्ठ 1

ऊनविंश पर जो प्रथम चरण
तेरा वह जीवन-सिन्धु-तरण;
तनये, ली कर दृक्पात तरुण
जनक से जन्म की विदा अरुण!
गीते मेरी, तज रूप-नाम
वर लिया अमर शाश्वत विराम
पूरे कर शुचितर सपर्याय
जीवन के अष्टादशाध्याय,
चढ़ मृत्यु-तरणि पर तूर्ण-चरण
कह – “पित:, पूर्ण आलोक-वरण
करती हूँ मैं, यह नहीं मरण,
‘सरोज’ का ज्योति:शरण – तरण!” —

अशब्द अधरों का सुना भाष,
मैं कवि हूँ, पाया है प्रकाश
मैंने कुछ, अहरह रह निर्भर
ज्योतिस्तरणा के चरणों पर।
जीवित-कविते, शत-शर-जर्जर
छोड़ कर पिता को पृथ्वी पर
तू गई स्वर्ग, क्या यह विचार —
“जब पिता करेंगे मार्ग पार
यह, अक्षम अति, तब मैं सक्षम,
तारूँगी कर गह दुस्तर तम?” —

कहता तेरा प्रयाण सविनय, —
कोई न था अन्य भावोदय।
श्रावण-नभ का स्तब्धान्धकार
शुक्ला प्रथमा, कर गई पार!

धन्ये, मैं पिता निरर्थक था,
कुछ भी तेरे हित न कर सका!
जाना तो अर्थागमोपाय,
पर रहा सदा संकुचित-काय
लखकर अनर्थ आर्थिक पथ पर
हारता रहा मैं स्वार्थ-समर।
शुचिते, पहनाकर चीनांशुक
रख सका न तुझे अत: दधिमुख।
क्षीण का न छीना कभी अन्न,
मैं लख न सका वे दृग विपन्न;
अपने आँसुओं अत: बिम्बित
देखे हैं अपने ही मुख-चित।

सोचा है नत हो बार बार —
“यह हिन्दी का स्नेहोपहार,
यह नहीं हार मेरी, भास्वर
यह रत्नहार-लोकोत्तर वर!” —
अन्यथा, जहाँ है भाव शुद्ध
साहित्य-कला-कौशल प्रबुद्ध,
हैं दिये हुए मेरे प्रमाण
कुछ वहाँ, प्राप्ति को समाधान


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