It is really a great story so far. What you need to do next is to write what did Ryker and Noelle do when they heard the footsteps above them. Did they investigate or did they leave the house? Since Ryker had already told Noelle that his brother was going to try and murder her, I don't think you should send them directly upstairs to see what or who made the footsteps. You should let the story continue a little more to be more dramatic. Don't let the story be a cliche like others would do. Perhaps, they could hide and wait to see who comes down. They could also catch the brother and then call the police or even the parents. You want the story to be different and have more excite to make the reader be wowed in the end.
She looked at the real world and left the tower.
You're answer would be A because it clearly states the thesis of the paragraph.
Answer:I'm a junior and believe me I understand what your going through as a freshman and I've struggled with math before too! It's obviously not great to have a C in a class. Just because you have a C though doesn't mean you should give up I say just try to get a good picture of what grade you think you can achieve whether it be an A or a B and set that goal for yourself. I used videos from google to help me with certain subjects I didn't understand and took advantage of tutoring when I could. Try your best and if a C is still what you get then be proud of yourself and don't worry too much because in the end it is just a grade. it's nothing to cry over and you're amazing either way!
