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Dovator [93]
3 years ago
12

Can someone please proofread my essay

English
1 answer:
Setler [38]3 years ago
7 0

An event in my life, that has affected me, changed the way I view the world. This event happened during the summer, I had went to a local mosque, which is a building that resembles a church. that's when I faced a life or death situation.

my family and I went to the mosque that night, they were hosting an event.the seating area was set outside, and many people were already seated. a table in the back, was serving food, and that's were I met up with my friend. We ate, after we were finished eating we decided to go for a walk around the mosque. we talked and got caught up with each others lives.

I talked about this book I had been reading recently, called "They both die at the end". It's about an alternate universe where this company called "Death Cast" calls you the day you're  going to die to inform you that you will die within the day. The main characters  Rufus and Mateo got the same call on the same day, they met on an app and became friends. I was about to tell my friend how heartbreaking there deaths were, when we passed a group of seven and eight year olds, that were playing. One of the kids gave us a stress ball, we accepted them and walked away. my friend dropped her stress ball, my first reaction was to go after it  and that is when everything went wrong.

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