There are several different ways to rewrite each sentence, but I'll just rewrite them two ways each.
Question 8.
- She took a dip in the ocean occasionally, since the water looked green and cool.
- The water looked green and cool, so she took a dip in the ocean occasionally.
Question 9.
- Everybody seemed to take it easy down South. What a wonderful winter vacation that was! (Only sentences I could think of)
Question 10.
- The memory of the trip lingered on when she went back to school the next day.
- When she went back to school the next day, the memory of the trip lingered on.
Answer:
C. It creates an atmosphere of mystery
Explanation:
The passage gives out a few clues:
1. two am
2. stealthy step
3. long black shadow
4. man with a candle
5. notice the 2 key words in the middle of the passage, stealthy and cautiously
(for reason #5 i'm sure they weren't pointed out for that reason, it's just something that I noticed and was a huge hint for me)
Answer:
I only have one
Explanation:
but maybe to make sure there vitals are ok and that there is nothing wrong
family
Explanation:
because family are around you all of the time
When you meet someone, you should say hello, smile and shake hands. Parallel structure entitles that all the verbs be written in the same for. In the future, try reading the sentences out loud and the poorly written sentences will make themselves known. Hope this helped.