Every year, 15 million Americans are the victims of computer hackers who steal their personal information. And this number is gr
owing every year. Hackers can break into your bank accounts, cell phones, and computers. There are steps that you can take to protect yourself online. For example, some software can prevent you from visiting websites that could steal your information and misuse it.
The US was against colonialism because they were once a colony for the British. They also wanted to dominate the Western hemisphere and all the countries near them in their own imperialistic schemes.
You changed the type of narration in the first sentence you said you were Lizzy and in the second sentence you were story telling third person.
The better way to word the second sentence is: 'Lizzy was a senior in high school and had been thinking about going to Harvard university but then plans changed however not for the better.'
You can try to find more complicated words to make the text more interesting.
