It should be removed from the editorial piece because it is repetitive to the rest of it pointing out the fact they we in the United States should get rid of nine-month calender's and continue with year-round schooling. Also in sentence 1) it should either be (help a student's achievement) or (help student's with their achievements)
When an author hints at what's going to happen layer it's called foreshadowing
Answer:
Ill try my best! I will be providing/editing out the paragraphs and changing it to what I would personally say.
Explanation:
I have learned so much, and I also have gotten an incredible boost of confidence in the little time Mrs. Bryan has been here. I have learned how to sing with ways that sound good. The choir teacher before was awesome and taught us numerous stuff. Mrs. Bryan, teaches us new skills and techniques to make us better singers.
I'm running out of time but I hope this helped.
Answer:take a deep breath and start again
Explanation:
Things happen
