<span>The writing is choppy.
I believe this is the answer. If the writing was connected, sentences would already be combined. Varied writing and lengthy writing usually has nothing to do with sentence combination.</span>
Answer:
you are missing some commas
Explanation:
the sentence should be
The sun was just slipping below the horizon when aunt Nakki , who had ridden her camel from the sultry areas. to the south, arrived at our camp
Answer: D
Explanation: "Mayor Dixon" has an OPINION (bias) that he wants teens to get afterschool jobs. Bias is not facts, but opinions. A would not be it because even though it may be offensive, it's not just someone's opinion on the topic. B isn't it, since the student is asking for help. And its not C either because that is a fact, and if it was biased against the teens, that would be contradicting the statement since its showing that the teens DID do something, and volunteered, sort of like a job.
Archetype? Symbol? Either of those could work
Honestly..... You didn't do anything wrong because it is a communication barrier. And you both didn't understand each other. Hope this helps you out. Good luck!