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Moving to a new place can be tough on anyone, especially if the move is to a new state. At the start if a new move, you may think that many things will be different in your life, and that nothing will be enjoyable ever again. Your surroundings may have to change. Your good friends and favorite activities, however, do not. You can still maintain your friendships through a variety of technological ways, which may include talking on a cell phone, writing an email, and seeing a friend on video chat. Technology can help you stay in contact and be up to date with everything that your friends are doing. You can even continue doing your favorite activities, which might include sports. Most towns and cities have their own teams, leagues, or clubs for popular activities, So, you really don't have to give up what you love to do. Knowing that your friends and activities do not have to change can help you be more open to the idea of moving.

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A quotes about The Mother : The moment a child is born, the mother is also born. She never existed before. The woman existed, but the mother, never. A mother is something absolutely new. ~Rajneesh Mother love is the fuel that enables a normal human being to do the impossible. ~Marion C. Garretty A mother is the truest friend we have, when trials heavy and sudden, fall upon us; when adversity takes the place of prosperity; when friends who rejoice with us in our sunshine desert us; when trouble thickens around us, still will she cling to us, and endeavor by her kind precepts and counsels to dissipate the clouds of darkness, and cause peace to return to our hearts. ~Washington Irving

Everyone in the world has a different opinion about what a hero is. They come in many shapes, sizes, have different characteristics, values, and beliefs. For me, a hero is someone who is willing to put a hundred percent effort into protecting you from pain. They will stop at nothing to provide you with the security of safety; and will share with you the knowledge required for survival. A hero doesn't have to have impeccable character, high importance in society, or have a classic sandwich named after them in the local pub. A hero just needs to be someone who cares for your happiness and loves you for being yourself. My mother is my hero.

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Another character trait makes my mom a heroine is that she also has a great heart. She always willing to help out. She likes to help out at church and she likes to help out all her friends. She also likes to give people stuff that they really need. That's why I know that she has a great heart. My mom keeps everything real and she doesn't care what color or sex you are. If you need her then she's there for you no matter what. Like my hero said, "Life's too short not to want to do good deeds." Writing a paper on unrecognized heroes makes me feel real good and it lets them know that somebody recognized what they're doing and they will be rewarded for it.

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