I would say a thunderstorm since the sky is dark and ominous means something scary or dark so that's why it could be a thunderstorm!
Hope I helped!
<span>If I like it:
Yes, I like this poem. It seems/feels so intimate, yet somehow I feel connected to the character.
What emotions are there:
I believe the emotions a reader would feel would be sorrow, pity, despair, grief and helplessness because he/she has no power to help the abused.
What I would add to make it better:
I probably wouldn't, perhaps start posting it publicly to sites like 'Wattpad', to get a wider perspective from public comments.</span>
C) who reads it.
The audience is determined by the subject, and who reads it is the audience. Hope this helps!
