Practice writing until you can tell what you have done well or poorly and can edit your own work.
Answer:
I try to speak but
My mind is deep in thought
They're calling me back to earth like I'm an astronaut
[someone who spaces out often]
or
I don't hate you
I just need some time alone
I'm sorry I can't stay
I'd rather be at home
[introverted]
The answer to your question would be that the version of the sentence that has correctly placed commas is the following one: Noah, who draws comic books in his free time, wants to write a graphic novel. That is, your answer would be option A.
The clause set off with the commas is a non-restrictive relative clause. This means that it provides information which is considered non-essential to the meaning of the sentence and therefore can be dropped without altering its meaning. That is why they are set off with commas, parentheses or dashes.